Littlethumb Sneezed

What would happen if everything in the world froze but you? Littlethumb Sneezed is the tale of prolific artist and renowned philanthropist Littlethumb Brooks. From the discovery of his creative genius as a child to his rise to fame, join Littlethumb on a satirical journey through the world of American pop culture. It is a life filled with love, laughter, charity, art, disguises, magic tricks, international intrigue, and unfortunately, horrible tragedy. There’s also a punk rocker named Tommy Toxic. It began with the Occurrence. Littlethumb was a little boy…

Critic Evaluation

Cover Design Score: 7

The cover design is clear and serviceable but not eye-catching

Book Blurb Score: 8

The book blurb contains the right mix of the key events to be intriguing.

Formatting Score: 10

There were no issues

Grammar & Spelling Score: 10

There were no issues

Plot & Structure Score: 9

The structure works well for this type of story and the moving backwards and forwards in time complements the narrative.

Character Development Score: 9

Littlethumb is charismatic as a ten year old and develops along the same lines as an adult. His would-be nemesis goes from jealous teenager with a mean streak to full on sociopath. He and Littlethumb are opposites; Sawyer is the moral barometer and his journey from opportunist to philanthropist is well delivered.

Originality Score: 10

I found this story highly original. The twists and turns were both surprising and believable.

Pacing Score: 7

Throughout the first third of the narrative, the narrator's commentary intrudes and slows the pace. After that, the story flows because there is less commentary.

Use of Language Score: 7

The author employs too much repetition at times, as if he needs to press home his point. He doesn't and some trimming back would enhance the narrative.

Overall Readability Score: 8

This is a very intriguing and engaging story, so despite my reservations about over-description and commentary, I found it very readable. Once the story got going, I was turning the pages to find out what would happen next.

This book received a critic's score of 85 out of 100 possible points.

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